Post #121002 by lanikai on Fri, Oct 22, 2004 12:22 AM

On 2004-10-19 20:15, Raffertiki wrote: If you guys could give me some feedback as to how it shows up on your browsers, it would be quite helpful. It appears large on my monitor and doesn't look the greatest until I scale it down.

I LUV to see this kinda thing!
Good job! Comfortable visuals.

It's small on my monitor. I would save the .mov at a higher aspect ratio.
use a reflector on the subject.
or low fill in light.
Pull back on shots that cause you to pan too much; the fruit shot ; subject falls out of frame. I would have the bartender make some eye contact with camera. smile. Nothin worse than a blase barkeep.
To keep editing tight, i would cut the few frames that show her apparently washing dishes or whatevahs. Where she burrows unda da counter. Not needed.
Mel needs a slightly more enthusiatic shaking technique.
I would reshoot the end; Unappealing to see a bartender handle the suckin' end/tip of a straw.
Bartenders, esp. the ones that also handle money, don't touch rims of glassware or the tips of straws.
...other than those 43 things, great!
got more?

[ Edited by: lanikai on 2004-10-22 00:40 ]