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Beyond Tiki, Bilge, and Test / Beyond Tiki / short story for the car nuts

Post #140934 by ikitnrev on Sun, Feb 13, 2005 8:55 AM

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The feeling that the driver of your story feels when behind the wheel, is very similar to the feeling when I am in a good tiki bar, with mai-tai in hand. The main differences are that

  1. the driver can still see the world outside his windshied, while tiki bars are usually windowless
  2. the car is likely much noisier and
  3. hopefully I am smiling instead of smirking

Nice imagery - I hope you continue your writing

Vern