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Post #341024 by Mr. NoNaMe on Mon, Oct 29, 2007 11:35 AM

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Yes, inappropriate.
Kinda weird, too. Weird in that you are describing to the readers that there is an association with stripping and your daughter and you watching strippers.
As a writer you should try to avoid having the reader make assumptions as to your personal activities. Especially if it could be misconstrued in a negative manner. Unless, of course, it is a fringe paper.

NUTS!!!! The show was Tivo'd and now I know it. But, I do enjoy the show.