Post #490331 by Hakalugi on Mon, Oct 26, 2009 8:20 PM

H Hakalugi Special Tiki Central Agent Redondo Beach, CA Joined: Aug 10, 2004 Posts: 3465	H Hakalugi Posted posted on Mon, Oct 26, 2009 8:20 PM You might want to consider rewording this part: On 2009-10-26 18:25, Cammo wrote: ... a man coming up the stairs, slowly, looking at her, with a red mouth and no eyes. Irregardless, looking forward to more! (~~)