Post #673877 by Atomic Tiki Punk on Tue, Apr 9, 2013 7:17 PM

Hi Gwen,

You have the Artistic chops for sure, but I have to question the concept
on this particular Triptych, it is not a focused choice of subject

As a matter of fact the only thing Tiki are the two Tikis on the sides
the dog is the primary focus of the pictures with the prehistoric back ground as the secondary
(You must ether love dogs or have this Greyhound as a pet & was compelled to include it on this piece)
you have already lost the focus of the subject matter.

So what I see is this, A Greyhound & two Tikis some how go back in time to the Jurassic period
& the Greyhound is about to become Teradactyl chow, was this what you wanted to convey?

But your execution is very nice & I look forward to more of your work in the future
(see, this is what happens when you ask someone who has done to many years in Art school, "what do they think?") :lol: