A little help?

Hey guys, thanks for the help!

Trying to get my tiki art images to look good on the web & having some trouble. Please see my test message post:

https://tikicentral.com/viewtopic.php?topic=9723&forum=3&2

PS. I still feel like a bit of a TC newbie whose not quite up on the proper site etiquitte. I didn't think people would mind helping me out, but is it okay to post a message like this on this forum, or is it a little too self-serving...?