Post #683966 by Atomic Tiki Punk on Sat, Jun 29, 2013 7:18 PM

Hey Brad, for what it is worth (your a far better artist then I)
the painting is off balance, very much to the left city scape side, I think there is
to much detail in the shark/roof Tiki bar area that strongly draws the eye to it and away from the foreground.

The foreground Tikis become the secondary objects, maybe a fire or Tiki torch to the right of the front group of Tikis
with some flame providing a subtle lighting affect on the face of the Tikis from the right side?

just my 2 cents.....