Writing Critique Needed - Bilge

V VampiressRN Grand Member (1 year) Sun City Lincoln Hills (NorCal) Joined: Nov 23, 2006 Posts: 6166	V VampiressRN Posted posted on Wed, Feb 19, 2014 8:24 PM Although I agree with all of your content, some of the guidelines might be taken wrong and people do tend to do what they want anyway. Here are some thoughts. Feel free to use my name and address for the donations. RSVP REQUIRED for catering purposes. Stamped envelope enclosed, or via email at [email protected] CHURCH SEATING capacity is 180, there is additional standing room in the entrance lobby. ADULT RECEPTION, there is no child care available. DONATIONS to our favorite charity "The XXX XXX" are preferred over gifts. Include link here.

Although I agree with all of your content, some of the guidelines might be taken wrong and people do tend to do what they want anyway. Here are some thoughts. Feel free to use my name and address for the donations.

RSVP REQUIRED for catering purposes. Stamped envelope enclosed, or via email at [email protected]

CHURCH SEATING capacity is 180, there is additional standing room in the entrance lobby.

ADULT RECEPTION, there is no child care available.

DONATIONS to our favorite charity "The XXX XXX" are preferred over gifts. Include link here.

Post #708782 by VampiressRN on Wed, Feb 19, 2014 8:24 PM