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Bam Bam
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Hi All! As part of the program flier we are planning to hand out at the Bloomsburg Community Luau, I felt it would be a good idea to dedicate some space to educating visitors on a bit of history and other information. I'm trying to be as factual and clear as possible while still keeping things succinct - which is often difficult. Feel free to fact-check as needed. (note: Louie and Mo are the mascots of the luau - caricatures of the first two large carvings I made) Would love TC's opinion on the text!
EDIT: Already found a typo: ti leaves, not taro! [ Edited by Bam Bam on 2023-06-26 13:34:08 ] |
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MadDogMike
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06/26/2023
I like it! |
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swizzle
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06/27/2023
Looks pretty good to me. And just in case you're interested, i watched this a couple of days ago and it briefly mentions Tiki and luaus at 7:27 |
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