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Post #282901 by VampiressRN on Sat, Feb 3, 2007 2:33 PM
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I just skimmed through the petition and like the wording...so here is my feedback; TYPO: "Indeed, in Beverly Hills, Californian these rare and wonderfully" (remove the N...it should be California) REMOVE PERIOD: "(*) .Recommend to the municipal governing board areas" (prior to Recommend.....remove the priod) I assume the rest is copied from another similar document....nice work. :) |