Post #750959 by Comicbookhero on Wed, Sep 16, 2015 10:01 AM

I am an editor and I will tell you the same thing that I tell writers when they have decisions like this. "What are you trying to convey?" I honestly like all of the options you have created, but which one evokes the feeling you are trying to convey with the tiki bar space you are building? Here is what comes to my mind for me with each one:

The Lili-Kai Club - "Club" always conjures dark, mysterious, and tucked away for me.
The Royal Lili-Kai - Classic 50's tiki bar name that would pair nicely if you want that 50's aesthetic.
The Grand Lili-Kai - Same general feeling as "Royal." Use this though if you want less accentuation of pomp and circumstance.
The Lili-Kai Grotto - "Grotto" gives you the tucked away aspect of "Club" but with an emphasis on being unspoiled and part of nature.
Kapu Lili-Kai - I would use this if you want to convey more of the Polynesian roots of Tiki culture.

I hope this helps.

[ Edited by: Comicbookhero 2015-09-21 10:34 ]